This is correct. Make sure to put a space after the comma that comes after Daises though.
Answer:
Some accomplishments I would like to accomplish in life are:
1. Write and publish a science fiction novel
2. Run an online dance wear business
3. Dance Sugar Plum Fairy in the Nutcracker
4. Join a human rights organization and fight against the death penalty
5. Learn how to sew on a sewing machine and make my own clothes
6. Learn how to speak Norwegian, Dutch, and German fluently.
7. Move to a foreign country
Explanation:
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