Her last smile to me wasn't a sunset. It was an eclipse, the last eclipse, noon dying away to darkness where there would be no dawn. My Uber driver looked like a deflating airbag and sounded like talk radio on repeat.
Explanation:
The primary purpose of descriptive writing is to describe a person, place or thing in such a way that a picture is formed in the reader's mind. Capturing an event through descriptive writing involves paying close attention to the details by using all of your five senses.
if it is the best shape possible it is not a brainstorm and you can assume they have edited it. between revising or publishing. but they have written a draft so revising.
