The way I'd change it would be :
'Great White Sharks are quite fascinating creatures if you research the history that goes along with them. Their records are very ancient and they are one of the longest existing species to live on this earth today!'
It's a bit on the scientific side, but I hope I helped even a little.
Summarize the passage, identify the audience, and enter the details into a graphic organizer.
1= essay
2= report
3= report
4= essay
5= report
One of the more obvious differences between reports<span> and </span>essays<span> is that </span>reports<span> always use sections with headings, and each of these sections has a particular purpose. As you will do in an </span>essay<span>, however, you are also required to analyse, evaluate and produce a line of argument to support your </span>report<span> outcomes.
</span>using your judgement after looking at this see if what i think is correct... is correct :)
