Paragraph 2 is the only one, from what i can tell, that describes any type of relationship with the dad.
Wooww...your poem is amazing...
The only idea I can suggest is to use more sophisticated vocabulary to express your thoughts and feelings and maybe a range of punctuation.
Answer by YourHope:
Which logical fallacy does this passage contain?
Trisha Heber should be class president because she said she would be a good president.
B. Begging The Question!
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