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Jilly enjoys her job, so she is not ready for it to be over.
When getting the writing prompt. Write down ideas and then begin the rough draft
I would try to use attractive descriptive words, such as lush or shining, something to captivate their memory. If I had any good stories to tell about the place I would want to focus on those, since stories make them imagine themselves in that place and situation, possibly making them want to go. Finally, I’d show them any pictures that I took to really capitalize on the beauty or charm of the place I’m talking about.
The structure of the document is a checklist.
The use of the comma here is incorrect because t<span>hese are two independent clauses and should be separated by a semi-colon or a period not a comma. Hope this is what you are looking for. </span>
