Answer:
I think that the use of suspense in this paragraph is excellent.
It makes me want to read on and hear more about what happened to the old lady.
Explanation:
I like how you used the following words:
whirred
gently
clawed
grasping
wispy
sensible
woolen
rocked
move
I think they are very good words as they describe what is going on :)
Answer:
A = She is upset because she realizes that she craves love, not life in the city.
B = "For she knew now that it was not the great city and its crowds of people she had so eagerly sought; but the pleasant-faced boy, who had made her picture that day under the mulberry tree."
Explanation:
The translation says: An agitation against the makers of the infuriated her that night, he