Unfortunately I can't write a story for you, but you can make some story up where your father saves you from running into oncoming traffic on a road, or where he saves you from choking on some food. I'm assuming anything will work
The woodpecker gave Hiawatha the secret to defeating his enemy.
B.
Patronizing
The words
within the quotation marks you provided can best be described as patronizing
because of how Mr. Auld seems to know what is best for someone other than
himself the way a parent would; however, in this instance it takes the tone of disrespect
as it is speaking of one who is grown as one would of a child who wouldn’t know
what is best for himself or herself.
somethings not "write" in the town . Change it to right
Last sentence after Nevertheless it needs a comma
Second sentence Thoughts rushed "threw" jacks mind. Change it to through
