Answer:
I think the 2nd one
Explanation:
cuz if you did it I would read it, and it sounds like an awesome movie or tv series to watch!!
Answer:
The rain danced on the pavement.
Explanation:
Personification is basically giving human characteristics to inanimate objects. :) Hopefully this helps!
The revision that would help expand the ideas in the excerpt is <span>adding more specifics about the sailors' beliefs about the island.
</span>The author just mentions their beliefs briefly, but doesn't really expand on that topic, which may be relevant further down in the text. This is why I believe that adding such details is important to include in this essay to make it more detailed and easy to understand.