Your audience can be anybody, children, adults, or any specific group of people. The audience is your reader.
Answer:
As i chase the dog down the street, it feels like its getting father and father away. I feel the hard concrete beneath my feet. All i hear is the sound of the rain pattering against the ground. As i run as fast as my legs can, I slowly catch up to the dog. We ran past old houses. As the lightning struck, i jumped on the dog and bit it's neck. It died instantly. AS i slowly dragged the body out of the street, I felt very hungry. I bit and scratched at the dog until his body ripped open. i ate like i haven't eaten in days. I chewed on the bones and licked the blood as if it was water. I left the dog's carcass there and walked into the dark woods. Never looking back.
Explanation:
The technique makes both excerpts effective is an appeal to logic.
Logos is the logic, reasoning and argument, or simulation of it, in a persuasive appeal.
Logos is a persuasive technique that tries to persuade an audience using logical arguments and supporting evidence.
