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When I was nineteen, I lived in Costa <u>R</u>ica for a few months. This beautiful country is filled with fruits and flowers growing everywhere. The country is also blessed with rain forests, mountains, and inactive volcanoes. One of my favorite memories <u>is</u> of a time I stayed overnight on the beach with some friends. At about midnight, we decided to stand waist-deep in the warm ocean water. A gentle rain began to fall<u>.</u> We could see lightning flashing in the clouds miles away. Suddenly, we all gasped in amazement. Lines of flickering green light were dancing across the tops of the waves <u>a</u>s they rolled toward us. We learned later that the light was caused by tiny glowing animals which live on the ocean<u>'</u>s surface. That night was a magical time for us.
Answer:
For starters, what topic did you choose?
Two, what's the paragraph you're revising?
Explanation:
Just add descriptive language and sensory details to the paragraph. For example, sensory details describe how we experience the world, touch, feel, hear, etc.
<em>good luck, i hope this helps :)</em>