Answer:
I fixed it here you go
Explanation:
Sentence: Their going to do very well on the test because there always paying attention to their favorite teacher, Ms.smith
to highlight her contempt for her parents
No it is not a personification. A personification is when you give human attributes to an object. For example, “The trees see everything.” The trees do not have eyes so they cannot really see but they are always there and always watching.