The “hook” is the opening sentence that grabs the readers attention.
the answer is most likely the first sentence
I wish to partake in such immense scenery with unbiased vision.
To take in the strong aroma which has brought joy to many before me with such a ocean of flowers.
To hear the chirping of birds and the buzz of bees pollinating does me great joy.
I wish to hold this place; all its worth and beauty in such corrupted and dark hands, to feast on the many rewards this lavish land provides.
<em>I just want to say thank you for posting the story it is really helpful but what is the question again?</em>
