Question

Learning Task No. 2 Directions: Rewrite the three-paragraph descriptive essay below, check the punctuations and if there is a need to include any signal words, please do so. Do this in your notebook. My favorite place in my mother’s house is the dining room. Every year my mother s house is chosen, by all of our family members to host the holiday dinners and parties because of how elegant her dining room is. As you walk thru the long narrow hallway on your way to the dining room you see the huge pictures of family members hung on both sides of the smooth colorful wall. It seems like you re walking forever then you reach the door of the infamous dining room. You re first greeted by the tall wide almond color and trimmed in gold door. The doorknob is always cold to touch like you re touching a block of ice. When you walk into the door the room is so cold, it feels like you re standing outside in a snow storm, in Alaska. However the smell that hits your nose is amazing​

Answer 1

The dining room is my favorite place in my entire house. This is because the dining room at my house is extremely elegant and this is not recognized only by me, but by my entire family, who always choose my house to attend dinners and New Year's parties, so everyone can have access to such a beautiful and elegant environment provided by my mother. The path to the dining room is lined with photographs of family members, which can be seen on both sides of the wall. This path is huge and at the end of it we can find a tall, wide door, almond-colored and decorated with gold, which marks the entrance to the dining room. The doorknob on this door leaves a cool feeling in your hand, as if your skin is touching a bar of ice. This feeling accompanies you the moment you walk into the dining room, as it has a temperature as cold as you would feel when walking in a storm. But the smell of the room is wonderful and reaches your nose in an incredible way.