Answer:
I think it's fine besides one tiny mistake! Great job.
Explanation:
The first one you put a space than period. Make sure to put the period first then space.
Answer:
My feet started out as one big bruise
Explanation:
this could mean that there were bruises all over that it felt like one big one, or that it just hurt all over and feels like there is any bruise at all, and one that covers both feet.
hope this helps!