The tale is told as if its happening once upon a dream
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When the daughter performed, her playing was sloppy.
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Saying "the daughter" twice is repitition and doesn't make the sentence flow smoothly.
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George and his teams struggles
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Answer:
I was the new kid at school and so I had to adjust to the new place and to new people. I was friendly to everyone so I made friends and then I fit in with everyone else. But on my first day it was hard, I was shy and quite and no one really talked to me. It was weird.
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