Question

Any advanced writers out there? I need some input. This story is a continuation of The Cask of Amontillado by Edgar Allen Poe.

Answer 1

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well you could tell them more about where the son was and what he was doing that whole time and make it like he's talking to his dad

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Answer 2

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OoOoOoOoOoOo its goooodd

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I would say you could like mention more about the reaction(s) of the townspeople and things about the building to stretch it. Like when you said the townspeople were a little shocked you could add something like "One lady may have even seemed she was going to faint" or sum like that. and about the building, you could say that everything was making you sick, the house itself? Or just add more details. But, tbh its really good and doesnt really need any work