I would say you could like mention more about the reaction(s) of the townspeople and things about the building to stretch it. Like when you said the townspeople were a little shocked you could add something like "One lady may have even seemed she was going to faint" or sum like that. and about the building, you could say that everything was making you sick, the house itself? Or just add more details. But, tbh its really good and doesnt really need any work
An important change came in 1786 when Virginia passed the Statute for Religious Freedom. Drafted by Thomas Jefferson, the new law served as a model for the First Amendment. It established a clear separation of church and state and was one of Jefferson's proudest accomplishments.
