I would say you could like mention more about the reaction(s) of the townspeople and things about the building to stretch it. Like when you said the townspeople were a little shocked you could add something like "One lady may have even seemed she was going to faint" or sum like that. and about the building, you could say that everything was making you sick, the house itself? Or just add more details. But, tbh its really good and doesnt really need any work
