Certain literary devices such as similes, metaphors, and personification can help create word pictures for the reader. When persuasive writers use figurative language, they are more likely to engage their readers and make their argument more relevant and convincing.
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I wouldn't use the word "discovered" it just seems a bit off. I'd rewrite the sentence with a simpler word yet easy to say and understand: "When we searched the school for damage, a new broken window was found." I hope this helps you. My apologies if this is incorrect.
        
             
        
        
        
<em>Minutes</em><em> </em><em>that</em><em> </em><em>Matter</em><em> </em>and <em>Defeating</em><em> </em><em>Dragons</em> are working for the same common goal: helping others. Both articles describe groups helping people constantly, consistently, and not asking for money in return, selflessly. Both groups also sacrifice their time and energy towards helping people, because they value everyone's life and happiness.
I included these revisions to add clarity to my writing, correct grammatical errors, and reduce run on sentences. Additionally, I reduced redundancy in the first paragraph.
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Alright
Explanation:
So they are similar because they both are to used to spread news and ads for stuff like jobs.
Newspaper is something you can hold, but news like a recent fire does not get around so quickly.
Facebo:ok you can contact you friends and family on, but it can malfunction and stop working because its on a phone.
 
        
             
        
        
        
An abandoned office would most likely be the best one. Just by hearing the word abandoned, it can give people chills because they don't expect what that abandoned office have. In a fiction story, it might have zombies or something.