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Lyrx [107]
3 years ago
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I wanted to apply to college for a personal essay can you tell me if its good please?

English
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Kryger [21]3 years ago
5 0

Answer:

I think ur essay really has potential

But I would include details of specifically how your hardships translated to a better work ethic, more compassion, etc

Also, in the intro part you say you weren't born with a "gold spoon" in ur mouth...the actual phrase is "silver spoon"

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