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The best word that can replace the word workaholic in order for it to have a positive connotation is the word INDUSTRIOUS. When we say industrious, this describes a person who works hard. In other words, hardworking or diligent. The word "workaholic" also has the same idea, but what makes this gives a negative connotation is the idea that someone works hard BUT compulsive.
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