Answer:
Not really no but it's a good one
It is better to define these words:
<em>Affect </em>means to have an effect on something or make a difference.
<em>Effect </em>is to cause something to happen.
<em>Afflict </em>is to cause pain or suffering.
<em>Effectuate </em>means to put into force.
<em>Compromise</em>: to settle a dispute.
<em>Compress </em>means to press something together.
<em>Commissive </em>is to assign someone to the power.
<em>Comprehensive</em>: Of or relating to every aspect of something.
According to the definitions, the correct answer pair is effected (with correct grammatical rule) and comprehensive.
Answer: The correct answer would be : "The first excerpt illustrates an internal conflict, while the second excerpt illustrates an external conflict."
I hope that this helps you !