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The hot, humid weather that ran through out Orlando, Florida was absolutely unbearable. While I was ecstatic to reunite with my aunt, uncle, and cousins after almost 3 years, I couldn't help but be disappointed by the landscape. I was under the impression that Florida would be paradise, I would feel the cool breeze of the ocean air on my face, the crunchy texture of the sand in between my toes, and taste the salt water on my lips. Yet, i've been here for under an hour and was feeling like I would melt! After an eternity, my family finally decided to head inside the house. Freed from the sun's sweltering heat, I ran to the refrigerator, opening the door and allowing the chilly air to waft out and cool my sweating body. After a couple minutes of relief, I re-joined my family in the living room. It was great to see everyone, I noticed how different everyone looked. My oldest cousin, Elliot, had grown much taller, towering over both his mother and father. Olivia, the youngest of my cousins, had also grown. Last time I saw her, she was barely two years old. Now, I watched as she ran as fast as her little legs could take her, circling the coffee table, babbling mindlessly as she went. My aunt called my name, drawing me out of my deep thought.
"We will be heading to a restaurant called La Cantina in an hour for dinner. It is right on the beach! You will love the view. "
My stomach grumbled in response, I hadn't eaten all day! After quickly agreeing, Elliot and I made our way to his bedroom. It had been so long since we last talked, I was excited to get caught up. Before we knew it, an hour had passed and we all made our way to the restaurant. The dinner was wonderful. I was so happy to finally be surrounded by family. Unfortunately, most of the family is spread out over the US, and we rarely get a chance to see each other! After a while, we made our way back to the house, bellies full and cheeks aching from so much laughter. I dreaded the day I would have to head back home.
... select this as the brainliest please!!...
Answer: “Its name is Ou-dis-sun, the Sacred”
“falling apart into great blocks
Explanation:
Okay. So. First of all, rlly nice story =D I'm glad you got what you wanted. Now, to the point.. at first, I started to list every point where i thought you can change, but to be honest, and i mean no offense when i say this, but i think itll take me a very long time and a printed out version to mark it up so i think ill jjust give u a couple of tips. I hope they help.
- you dont exactly have any main idea going... only after reading the entire thing did i understand what "the battle" was and why you were anxious to get the results. you should clarify in the beginning what it is youre talking abt. a sentence like " Sixth grade had just started, and already I had begun to lose focus. My brain seemed to constantly drift towards other, more important things; like the upcoming custody battle between my parents over my brother and I."
-dont use the same word over and over again. try not to use it more than twice in one paragraph, it becomes repetitive, and a little annoying to read. An example: '<span>That battle was cemented in my head, all I could do was think about that battle.', I would change the second "battle" to "it"... you can do the same to other sentences, just look up synonyms and replce them, itll mean the same thing.
- Also, words like "socializing" might be too strong a word to use.... you can put 'talking' lol... its important to remember that you dont always have to use big words, and especially when youre writing a personal narrative, you should stick to ones you use on a day to day basis... save the big ones for formal essays :)
- the tenses seem to change throughout the story.... you start out correctly. in the past tense, and then u use a verb in the future tense, such as "will happen"
- don't add details you dont need or dont support the main idea... like the part about forgetting your brother. its just a side detail. or u can change how u introduce that detail. instead of the two or three sentences about forgetting him, u can just write " I was so anxious and excited to find out what the results were that i forgot to pick up my younger brother on my way back home from school, and ended up having to go all the way back to get him, prolonging the suspense."
If you want more specific details on where to change exactly what, i suggest you go to someone in person, they might be able to help you more. Best of luck! </span>
I choose B because it was mainly about how reading helps your brain.
Odysseus because he traveled everywhere facing new obstacles each time and then he returned back home.
