Answer:
You could add futher punctuation and contractions. This sentence isn't grammatically correct either, as it's missing a conjuction.
Explanation:
We're very proud of our school, and we would like to give you a glimpse into the acedemic lives of our students.
You could also write the sentence without the conjuction, but it would have to be broken up into two separate thoughts.
Ex: We are very proud of our school. We would like to give you a glimple into the acedemic lives of our students
Answer:
i dont think so but maybe use a semi colon after the word desks to show how the two clauses are connected and make it sound less like a run-on sentence
Answer:
thanks! do you need a question that needs answered
Explanation:
I believe the pronoun in this sentence is <u>your key</u>.