A. The huge white van full of holiday packages for everyone came down the street, is the correct way to rewrite the following fragment.
As compared with other sentences, this sentence makes the appropriate use of preposition 'down' followed by the noun, which clarifies the sentence precisely.
In the other sentences B. The huge white van full of holiday packages for everyone rumbling and backfiring. C. The huge white van full of holiday packages for everyone on our whole block. D. The huge white van full of holiday packages for everyone in time for Christmas; does not frame the proper sentences as it joins the sentences abruptly without any direction specification.
Answer:
The best revision of the sentence is "The lawyer presented a clear argument to the jury (it was unbelievable how influenced they were by his case) in hope of winning the trial."
Explanation:
This sentence includes information that is not determining to its meaning, this information can be set apart by the use of parenthesis.
One of the uses of parenthesis is to enclose detail information or information that adds detail to the general sentence or clarifies pieces of information in the main part. It separates defining from non defining information.
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