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o-na [289]
3 years ago
9

What should I change? Also don’t worry about the first and last paragraph.

English
1 answer:
Reptile [31]3 years ago
4 0

Explanation:

You repeated what the theme is like more than 5 times. It should not be the transition sentence as well as the start of the paragraph. Vary the ways the start and end your paragraphs.

You should have 3 pieces of evidence of your theme. Start with that instead of repeating your theme

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