Answer:
Gordon should revise sentence 1 to provide specific details about what "struck" him as he first entered the room.
Explanation: Read the paragraph from Gordon's personal narrative.
1 When I first entered the room, I was really struck by what I saw. 2 It was my first day of cooking lessons, and I was on my way to fulfilling my dreams of one day becoming a chef in my own world-renowned restaurant. 3 I had spent countless hours of my childhood watching my parents, both professional chefs, prepare savory meals for my sisters and me. 4: From them, I had already obtained a solid foundation of cooking basics. 5 : However, it was in this room that I would build upon those basics and begin my ascent as a chef in my own right.
I hope I can help you Good night :)
1. exercise- it helps to relax the body and mind
2. relax your muscles- when you’re stress your body get tense so you can do stretches, get a massage, take a hot bath or shower to help to loosen your tense muscles
3. deep breathing- stopping and a taking a few deep breaths can take a lot of pressure off you
4. take a break- taking a break can help to reduce stress, it will make you take a moment to yourself to unwind and to grab a snack, a drink or to even take a walk
5. go easy on yourself- accept that you cannot do everything perfectly no matter how hard you try nor can you control everything that happens in your life. stop overthinking and just go with it from time to time
I HOPE THAT HELPS!:)
