Read the excerpt from a report. (1) Stopping trash before it gets to the ocean is way better than having to clean it up in the o
cean. (2) The city of Baltimore has a large machine called Mr. Trash Wheel. (3) The machine is powered by the sun and the flow of the river. (4) Floating booms off the front of the machine funnel garbage toward a conveyor belt. (5) The belt takes the garbage from the water and puts it in a dumpster. (6) The trash wheel helps collect garbage in the river after it flows out into the ocean Which revision improves the precision of the text?
I would say (6) The trash wheel helps collect garbage in the river after it flows out into the ocean.
Explanation:
I chose that one since it introduces the subject and also gives a brief explanation as to what the subject of the sentence is. All the others either don't state what the subject is or don't tell exactly what it does itself, so I believe (6) is correct. I hope that helps you out.
