NO! When you use the word I it reprresents an opinion, a persuausive essay is nothing but facts.
<span>To summarize anything, you need to start with a list. Jot down everything that
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Answer:
1: Never are students allowed to use dictionaries in the test.
2: Never could Mary have given you any money.
3: No sooner than he came home, the problem intensified.
4: Only occasionally does Sharon talk to me these days.
5: Under no circumstances are you to talk to him about any issue.
You need a comma after "at first". get rid of the second period in the fourth sentence. get rid of "but only the buildings."