Answer:
Steps you should choose:
- Remove sland and informal phrasing
- Support each point with clear evidence
- Check to see that the essay has a factual, straightforward tone
- Make sure that each paragraph has a clearly stated point
And the most important that is not listed here: GRAMMAR AND VOCAB CHECKING :)
Hope this help you :3
The second one is correct
Answer:
I don't know if you still need this but I thought it'd be fun to write anyway.
<em>I think that that writing is emotional</em>
<em>it is always new, always different</em>
<em>As long as it tells a story</em>
<em>Sometimes I feel more indifferent</em>
<em>When there's no theme.</em>
<em>When the event is insignificant.</em>
<em>I think writing is beautiful</em>
<em>Sometimes makes me incoherent</em>
<em>Because it's magnificent</em>
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Don't know if this helps, the instructions were kind of unclear, but hoped this helped!
<em>Stay cold, </em>
<em>Brook</em>
