I waste Alot of water in my day to day life
There are some leakages in my house That should be fixed in two to three days that water is being wasted
CONCLUSION : The leakages must be fixed Immediately but Because of the current situation of our country ( Lockdown) It is taking a lot of time
<span>The mechanics and organization are good, but sentences 1 and 3 should be edited to achieve a formal style and objective tone.
The sentences in the passage do not have errors in grammar or punctuation, so any of these options can be immediately removed. Ending the first sentence with the word "cool" and using "that's for sure" and "you" in the last sentence, give the passage a much more informal tone. These sentences should be revised for a more formal tone to have a stronger concluding paragraph.
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"The Sea of Faith
Was once, too, at the full, and round earth's shore...But now I only hear
Its melancholy, long, withdrawing roar,
Retreating, to the breath
Of the night-wind, down the vast edges drear
And naked shingles of the world." lines 1-11.
<span>This book takes place in Seaside Heights, New Jersey and Saudia Arabia.
</span>Jackie Hart is a funny and sarcastic
12 year old girl who's favorite thing to do is make people laugh.
She's the class clown in school, but unfortunately the teacher's don't find her that amusing. She gets 10 detentions on the first day of school. She has 2 options: she can either do the 25 detentions or participate in the school play, Charlie Brown.
<span>She's not that confident about the play, because she's had a stutter since kindergarten. Meanwhile she and her sisters are home alone most of the time, because her mother is working overseas and her dad is spending most of his time with a cute lifeguard.</span>
Personification, since death is not a living thing but saying it has a human attribute (a heart), makes it personification
