Hello! You've done well so far by adding a simile (stanza 3, line 1) and repetition (stanza 1, beginning of lines 1 and 2). But I'd like to help add some personification to the poem with the first 2 lines since A. it rarely shows up and B. it's one of the most important factors towards a poem when creating something with such detail.
"The future winking at us wishing us good luck
as we wash away worries with ideas of us being stuck"
These two lines offer personification because we give the "future" a human attribute of winking and wishing luck towards a person. Also, Alliteration is included in both these lines which can be seen by the repetition of "w"'s makes it's way in the second half of the first line and the first half of the second line.
I want to add some repetition for the end since you started with repetition at the beginning since it'll bring your ideas together in a much neater way.
"My family still keeps it's traditional pride
My family will push on making one last stride."
You have the repetition in "my family" as you used above, and it explains the ending of the book with the family still being who are they, only they accomplished there goal by making one final action, which is making the move.
I hope these lines help and if you need any more help, feel free to ask!
Answer: There are twenty three seats held by Democrats, eight by Republicans, and two independents who caucused with the Democrats as of the 2018 election.
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Explanation:
Answer:
Who is it about? To find out about main characters and others
What happened? what happen that was interesting
When did it take place? at what time, date did it take place or like saying it took place at Night time or Day time or Late noon
Where did it take place? What location did this happen at. hat was the surrounding like when they say sandy dunes and nothing in sight for miles that a Desert (Just and Example)
Why did it happen? what let up to the actions that took place in the reading session
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Explanation:
Thye correct answer is the following: Along my road trip I visited Rochester, Minnesota; Des Moines, Iowa; Lincoln, Nebraska; and Jefferson City, Missouri.
Semicolons are used within a sentence when it presents commas for smaller separations of nouns and you need a bigger separations to be represented. In this case, the speaker is listing the cities they visited and what states those cities belong to. Each city is correctly separated from its state by means of a comma, and each noun phrase (city plus state) is therefore separated from eachother by a semicolon.
