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I think your descriptions are great! I like the way you describe the setting and how it makes the observer feel with extreme detail. I was able to picture everything really well in my head. Moving forwards, I think what you should do is reassess what you're writing about. Maybe I misunderstood what you meant by <em>"describing a moutain," </em>but I feel that you spent too much time talking about the overall setting and how it made the observer feel instead of the actual mountain. I liked your description of the mountain being "a beast arisen from nowhere; its tip to be unseen" and I think you should continue this as you'll prevent yourself from drifting too far from the object of interest.
True, because it shows that you care for the amount.
Answer: B. Magazine Title
In the in-text citation shown above, it can be concluded that there is one information missing and that is the title of the magazine where the statement is taken from. The title of the magazine should have followed the article title and it should have been in italicized form.
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English anti-Catholicism was grounded in the fear that the Pope sought to reimpose not just religio-spirtual authority but also secular power over England, a view which was vindicated by hostile actions of the Vatican.
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The sentence does not use the words "I think" "I believe", it is direct and a statement.
