Answer:
If an author is writing about historical events, they should include historical material, but to emphasize it he should also probably add dialogue or a narrator, depending on the story.
You've switched, "my love of Country comes over me like a strong wind" and "The memories of the blissful moments I have spent with you come creeping over with me."
Number 2 is correct because this is an appositive sentence structure, which means one sentence is interrupted by another.
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