Answer:
D) Most people figured that Columbus discovered America, made friends with the Indians, and then told everyone else about this land.
Explanation:
Revision of any text or passage is need for a number of reasons, ranging from a simple grammar mistake to making the paper more precise, focused, structured, etc. The revision also allows for improved analytical skills, challenging one's own ideas, more strengthened argument, etc.
Among the given sentences, the one that needs to be revised is sentence D. Looking at the words used in this particular sentence, it is evident that the words are too informal, be it using<em> "most people figured", "made friends", or "told everyone else"</em>. They make the sentence too simple, too friendly, something one does with a close friend or relative. If these words are revised with words like 'most people believed', 'formed close relationship/ befriended', or 'revealed to everyone', then that makes the sentence seem more formal.
Thus, the correct answer is option D.
The direct object comes after the action verb while the subjective complement comes after a linking verb. :)
The answer is "A" because this one best fits this answer to this question
Our world would be different because without the printing press we would have no books, so school would be different and probably more difficult. Without the printing press we never would have printed bibles so church and any religious studies would be different (and probably more difficult) AND of course we would have no newspapers so there would be less advertising, and nothing to read on Sunday morning.
