1answer.
Ask question
Login Signup
Ask question
All categories
  • English
  • Mathematics
  • Social Studies
  • Business
  • History
  • Health
  • Geography
  • Biology
  • Physics
  • Chemistry
  • Computers and Technology
  • Arts
  • World Languages
  • Spanish
  • French
  • German
  • Advanced Placement (AP)
  • SAT
  • Medicine
  • Law
  • Engineering
Salsk061 [2.6K]
3 years ago
13

Can someone help me thank you.

English
1 answer:
BaLLatris [955]3 years ago
3 0

Answer:

I love going to the zoo with my dad. Many of the animals are cool and we like looking at animals especially lions. <u>because</u> (lions are big and strong and strong animals are scary) (Change : They are tough and ferocious, which makes them scary)<u> </u><u>in real life</u> but when they are in a cage it isn't so bad. <u>but</u> I would never want to be put in a cage because I would get sad. <u>so</u> (I don't know if the animals are happy or sad but) (change : Uncertain if the animals will feel happy or sad themselves) my dad (says)(change : said) that the animals at the zoo are very well taken care of and i shouldn't worry about them.

Explanation:

I added brackets to the parts where i changed the sentenced, underlined the parts I would cross out and bold the periods.

Where it says change : don't add that in the sentence.

You might be interested in
Read this excerpt from “Hills Like White Elephants” and answer the question. The woman brought two glasses of beer and two felt
Darya [45]
The correct answer is this: SHE DIVULGES HER DISDAIN OF HIS SUPERFICIALITY.
To be superficial means to be shallow, to lack depth. From the passage given above, the man in the passage show his ignorance by revealing that he has never seen white elephants before and the reply that the girl gave him shows that, she dislike his ignorance in such matter.
5 0
3 years ago
Read 2 more answers
What is a subordinate clause?<br> (Giving out free brainliest)
Rama09 [41]

Answer:

<u><em> a subordinate clause is a clause in a complex sentence that cannot stand alone as a complete sentence and that functions within the sentence as a noun or adjective or adverb A clause that cannot stand alone as a sentence, but functions as either a noun, adjective or adverb in a sentence.</em></u>

Explanation:

3 0
2 years ago
Read 2 more answers
A coordinate ajective is
STALIN [3.7K]

Coordinate adjectives are two or more adjectives that describe the same noun. Coordinate adjectives are equally important and are separated by a comma.

7 0
3 years ago
Read 2 more answers
Each year the R.C.M. struggled with new challenges which meant changes in policies and changes within the organization. They wer
JulijaS [17]
Answer: OPTIONS A
EXPLANATION
3 0
3 years ago
Read the excerpt from The Land.
Sergio039 [100]

Answer:

you you you you you you you you you you

8 0
1 year ago
Other questions:
  • PLEASE HELP ANYTHING WORKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    8·2 answers
  • The great, gleaming apparatus which fed him and would
    7·2 answers
  • Which trait is used to evaluate a writer's opinion and purpose? A. Voice B. Ideas and content C. Organization D. Conventions
    15·1 answer
  • What do you need to understand about a reading assignment first?
    5·1 answer
  • 21. My grandfather, who was a young boy at
    14·1 answer
  • Identify atleast two similies in a poem ,and discuss their possible meaning.Stolen rivers
    6·1 answer
  • I want to know the opposite of worst​
    6·2 answers
  • The girl that I'm talking to is my sister​
    9·1 answer
  • There are thick forests located above the limestone in the North Central Plains.
    15·1 answer
  • Activity 5. Instruction:List down below the purpose why a report should be written that you have learned out from this lesson. 1
    11·1 answer
Add answer
Login
Not registered? Fast signup
Signup
Login Signup
Ask question!