Well for starters cross out A) because everything doesn't have to be entertaining at the same time, cross out B) because its important to have evidence so people know its true, so its C) because showing evidence helps the audience know its correct.
Thats one sentence, if you give me the other i can help
A. A simple garden
BUT REALLY
It’s showcasing how Kathy copes with her family’s death by rejuvenating their family’s old garden, which was left to rot and decompose as years after the deaths she moved out and started deteriorating and eventually had to be put in a psych ward - after 8 months she got released and now she’s reminiscing about her nostalgic childhood when her family was still around to care for her.
C.
"Does not correct" means basically, not change.
The sentence needs to make sense, too.
The only sentence that doesn't correct it is:
My favorite snack is fruit salad, which is delicious with whipped cream.
Mr. Jones woke up and shot his <span>shotgun and the pellets hit the wall, scaring the animals and ending the meeting. </span>