<span>The writing is choppy.
I believe this is the answer. If the writing was connected, sentences would already be combined. Varied writing and lengthy writing usually has nothing to do with sentence combination.</span>
Answer:
D. She is fascinated by it.
Explanation:
Option D is correct.
From the poem, we discover that the narrator reveals that she likes to see it lap the miles and lick the valleys up. In fact, from the beginning of the poem, the narrator was actually revealing what was fascinating her about the train.
The narrator reveals that the train neighs like Boanerges then punctual as a star.
The answer is B because it doesn't have any commas and it wouldn't make sense without it. Looks like you got it correct.