Writing for points hahahaha 20 points yes 29
Answer: These are just some simple adjustments I would do. Anything I add or want to say will be in bold or italics, tell me if I get some of them wrong.
I really really really hope this helps :))))
Explanation:
Dr. Peck states “problems call forth our courage and wisdom.” Our pain gets in the way of solving our problems. Dr. Peck is speaking the truth, without a doubt. We stall and and hope our problems will go away. Suppose I need to finish my math homework. I don't understand it, so instead I act as if it’s non-existent. Dr. Peck also states “...attempt to avoid problems.” <em>(btw, that is how you quote part of a sentence, you did it right)</em> Instead we must solve them and meet them head on.
Personally, I feel this work is not to avoid our problems, but to meet them head on with determination and courage. Many people should read this book because it helps with procrastinating.
After we discover and transcend that life is difficult, we can break free of our old habits. Our old habits wear us down like plaque on our teeth.
The work of this excerpt was, indeed, factual. It provided me with a toothbrush to brush the plaque off my teeth. A key to life was handed to me. The data facts and statistics add up fluently so that we can see it in plain sight. <em>(try to sum it up without using too many fillers, like the "key to life was handed to me". It makes you seem like you're stalling.)</em>
Answer: See explanation
Explanation:
The parable of a lost sheep can be found in the book of Luke from Chapter 15 verse 3-7.
The parable of the list sheep was told by Jesus to show that God's Kingdom is accessible to those that have gone astray, to sinners and everyone as a whole.
According to Jesus, heaven rejoices when a sinner repents and turns a new leaf. There is happiness when a shepherd finds his lost sheep that has gone astray and he rejoices over it even more than the other 99 sheep that didn't go astray.
The idea is that when a sheep is lost, the shepherd will go after it and also when the sheep is found, heaven rejoices.
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B: A speech is meant to be delivered out loud; an essay is usually read silently
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