Question

Pain And Regret, this is one of of my other POEMS please tell what I could change or what you liked.

Answer 1

Answer:

it's awesome keep going xD

Answer 2

Hi Emma, this poem is really, really good, although it’s also really deep. And deep poems tend to not have a rhyming scheme. I really like the though put into this, but it would be better if you would reduce the rhyme scheme from AAAA to ABAB,