Here's a link i found hope it helps ! :)
https://www.google.com/search?rlz=1C1CHZL_enUS724US724&ei=Gu6TXJfxH7CQggeguKOADA&q=city+hunter+cast&oq=city+hunter&gs_l=psy-ab.1.1.0i71l8.0.0..7654...0.0..0.0.0.......0......gws-wiz.RaB9oNjR_Ec
Answer:
It has a good start, but you should add more context to what you are writing. It is hard to follow what is happening. Otherwise, the story is set up very well.
Start soft like p, measure 3 add a crescendo to a f and measure 4 and a slight decrescendo to a mp, hope this helps
