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Can someone please fix this sentance with the correct commas and any other stuff that needs to be corrected

Answer 1

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Corrected spelling and grammar is in bold, hope this helps :)

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In 2017, Ilhan Omar, born in October 4, 1982, made history by becoming the first Somali-American Muslim woman state representative. Omar took office in Minnesota in January 2017 and has already authored and co-authored over 190 bills, including a city ordinance in Minneapolis that “allows businesses to extend their hours 35 days a year to honor, respect, and accommodate Muslims celebrating Ramadan.” Omar is also the Director of Policy and Initiatives of the Women Organizing Women Network, an organization empowering Minnesota’s women—specifically immigrants—to become engaged citizens and leaders within their communities.

And that is my tribute to women who make a difference.

Answer 2

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In 2017, Ilhan Omar born in October 4, 1982 made history by becoming the first Somali-American Muslim woman state representative. Omar took office in Minnesota in January 2017 and has already authored and co-authored over 190 bills, including a city ordinance in Minneapolis. She said the following of “Allowing businesses to extend their hours 35 days a year to honor, respect, and accommodate Muslims celebrating Ramadan.” Omar is also the Director of Policy and Initiatives of the Women Organizing Women Network, a organization empowering Minnesota’s women -specifically immigrants- to become engaged citizens and leaders within their communities. Thank you, this is my tribute to women who make a difference

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