Here, i fixed your grammar and changed some words. If you'd like, i can help you write it! Im working on a novel or two.
"Far, far away lay a small farm with all the animals you would expect, horses, cows, dogs, and cats. Little Mary Johnson and her brother were wandering around the old run-down house in which they lived. Mary was following her brother. They went to the old Oak tree, exactly where he had seen the beehive. The tiny hill overlooked the little graveyard in town. Mary was scared of the small patch of land by the old church. They reached the top of the hill where Mary could hear a soft humming noise from inside.
She saw the small beehive at the top of the tree. She knew why her brother brought her here at the top of the small hill. See, her brother's class was learning about honey bees, and for most of the summer break, he had been leading her to where he had found the small buzzing, bright yellow but pitch black striped insects."
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I am pretty sure that the coreect answer which show the similarities of rock pile and the apartment in the rock pile by James Baldwin is being revealed be the second statement from the scale represented above : Both have a feeling of danger. And if more that one is possible, I'd choose this one : Both are centers of the community.
I'm pretty sure it's standards
