women work as men women get ejucation to day ejucated women have big hand in the progress of country to day is Mariam muktair who is the first women pailot in history of Pakistan i solut her she gave the wav of Pakistani women to progress for country over the world know that without edjcated women no country succeed
Wow, that was good. I'd put more rhyming words depending on the poem you want it to be, but all in all great work.
Well it all depends on what you're writing about. When you write your rough draft think about the feeling it gives when reading it over. Then if it feels right, give it a go. This might not help much but think about how you feel while reading it.
Human nature often calls for us to run and take shelter whenever there is danger near by. However, sometimes compassion takes over human nature and thus causes people to risk their lives for the well being of others. Humans are more than their nature intends us to be. If everyone was confined to their natural instincts, there would be no stories of people saving the day.
