D: Records from ancient Athens indicate that each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe with which they dressed...
Explanation:
The sentence in option D corrects the error in the question presented because the part "each year young Athenian women ..." complementing the phrase "Based on records..." gives the idea that that action was based onrecords , whereas "Records from ancient Athens indicate..." is more appropriate . The same for "With which they dressed" is more direct than "that they used to dress."
