Question

Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper spelling and grammar.
Leah grabbed her purse and got on the bus. She pulled out her phone to text her friend. Someone on the bus asked her about her phone. The bus arrived at the mall, and Leah got out. She had forgotten her purse!

Answer 1

Answer:

At first, Leah grabbed her purse and got on the bus. In the same way, She pulled out her phone to text her friend. All of a sudden, Someone on the bus asked her about her phone. In a flash, the bus arrived at the mall, and Leah got out. At last, She had forgotten her purse!

Explanation:

The word 'temporal' itself stands for time. Temporal transitions are also described as the transition words that are employed to denote the duration, passage, or frequency of a particular event in time. These transition words are employed to bridge the gap between two ideas by expressing time or frequency and make them more coherent and easy to understand. In the given paragraph, the words like 'At first,' 'In the same way,' 'all of a sudden,' etc. adds association among the ideas.