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viva [34]
2 years ago
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How should this paragraph be revised so that it is correct?

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1 answer:
Cerrena [4.2K]2 years ago
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Answer:

Revising a paragraph can be done by anyone with basic grammar and spelling skills. The key to revising a paragraph is choosing an area to focus on so that the process isn’t overwhelming.

Explanation:

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