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My greatest day started when I went to see my father for the first time in 7 years. When i arrived at his house i started to get nervous, but when i went to hug him i felt comforted. After I left to go back to my house with me, my mom, my siblings, and my step-father I got ready to go get something to eat with my best friend. My friend and I went to Burger King. When I walked in all I smelled was burgers. I got back to my house only to find my mom dressed in her Halloween costume. Oh, I almost forgot that my mom and I were going to the Niles Scream Park. I got my Halloween costume on then my mom drove the both of us to the Niles Scream Park. I got more and more nervous as I walked closer to the door where I'd be let inside. I got inside and my heart and started to beat faster and faster. I was walking into the next room when this “vampire'' jumped out, i got scared a little. I walked through more than half of the Niles Scream Park when this clown popped out of nowhere and scared me so bad that I kicked the clown. I apologized then left embarrassed.
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