Question

Read the paragraph. Rewrite the altered excerpt from Ray Bradbury's "All Summer in a Day" with the correct punctuation for fluency. The children lay out laughing, on the jungle mattress, and heard it sigh and squeak under them, resilient and alive They ran among the trees they slipped and fell they pushed each other they played hide-and-seek and tag, but most of all they squinted at the sun until the tears ran down their faces, they put their hands up to that yellowness and that amazing blueness and they breathed of the fresh fresh air and listened and listened to the silence which suspended them in a blessed sea of no sound and no motion They looked at everything and savored everything Then wildly like animals escaped from their caves they ran and ran in shouting circles They ran for an hour and did not stop running.

Answer 1

Answer: The children lay out laughing, on the jungle mattress, and heard it sigh and squeak under them, resilient and alive. They ran among the trees they slipped and fell they pushed each other. They played hide-and-seek and tag, but most of all they squinted at the sun until the tears ran down their faces. They put their hands up to that yellowness and that amazing blueness and they breathed of the fresh fresh air and listened to the silence which suspended them in a blessed sea of no sound and no motion. They looked at everything and savored everything. Then wildly like animals escaped from their caves they ran and ran in shouting circles. They ran for an hour and did not stop running.

Explanation:

All you had to do was add puctuation.