I'm writing a essay/portfolio on critiquing my essays throughout the year. How would I write an introductory paragraph? Or have
a hook to grab the audiences attention? I have to talk about how I improved in or didn't improve in critical thinking, communication skills, personal responsibility, and quantitative skills in my writing
I would briefly discuss your essays in the intro and make a claim about how you improved. in your body i would talk about why you think you improved and what you could do to get even better
