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Parent: "Hey what are you doing there, we're in the middle of hiking!"
Kid: "mhm..."
Parent: "It's always kids and their smartphones, always getting distracted, or playing stupid games."
Kid: "It's not stupid!"
Parent: "It also kills your eyes, tampers with your brain, and makes you addicted."
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I'd use explicit details describing every bit for example Marrissa just got home from soccer she was walking up the sidewalk, they had just beat the Longway Eels and she was tired. When i get inside I'll just go up to my room and rest she thought. She grabbed her keys to unlock but found it was already open. Hands sweaty and shaking she slowly pushed open the door. Creeeaak. Slowly she walked inside shaking from head to toe. Uuumm Hello she said you could hear the fear in her voice. Mom iii'ts me Marissa. She said as she looked from side to side slowly, she walked into the kitchen and saw a note on the fridge. Dear Marrissa, I went out to get some grocceries for dinner i left door unlocked wasn't sure if you had your keys be back soon Love, Mom. She took a sigh of relief. She laughed. I was scared for nothing well i guess i can go rest now. As she went up the stairs, she heard a strange noise reee scratch scratch She took a deep breath it probably nothing Marri stop scaring yourself. She continued to climb up the stairs she heard the noise again reeeee She gulped she climbed last step creeeak RAAAA. She screamed aaa and ran into her room and shut the door she turned on the light a stopped to take a breath maybe i should do some homework she grabbed her book bag and sat at her desk and started on her math homework. the light flickered she jumped it's just the power the light always flicker Marri calm down she continued with her work her neck started to get warm she felt the deep breaths on her neck haa haaaa
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a funny political cartoon. a news report.
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Maybe try showing more fear of the spider, like shaking, sweating, etc.. You could also try dragging out the part before you kill the spider, like when you're walking towards it. When you end the story, you can say something about how the spider was small, probably couldn't hurt you, and other things like that.
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Here's an example of this:
I frantically scanned my room for a weapon, I could feel my heart trying to beat out of my chest, my eyes locked on my blue slippers. I grabbed them, my hands were shaking, my knuckles were white, fear and dread bubbled up inside of me. I moved slowly, shaking more and more and I got closer to the 8-legged demon. When the spider was in swinging range, I took a deep breath, I could barely breathe and I was panicking. In my head, I shouted, "I am bigger than that spider; I will kill that spider!" Gripping my blue slippers I swung. I held my slipper there, pressed against the wall, one, two, three. Just then I realized that the spider was probably dead, I quickly dropped the slipper and scrambled to the other side of my room, then I realized...
These are just some ideas, but I hope this helps :) please excuse the not so great paragraph
In order to do a rhyme scheme look at the last few words of each line and name each new one with a letter a,b,c,d
Each time that a similar or rhyming sound is mentioned in different lines repeat the letter
Example: The rhyme scheme is aba
I wish there was a way to go back ( a )
To take back everything I said ( b)
I wish would come back ( a)
