The correct answer is C. Kiana peered at her watch. It had been four hours since she and Albert had started hiking the trail, but their destination had not yet appeared. What if they were lost? She hoped Albert couldn't sense her worry.
Explanation:
Excerpt C is the only one that describes the actions of a story by using third-person pronouns such as "she" or "they", which is the main feature in the third-person point of view. This is exemplified in "Kiana peered at her watch" or "She hoped Albert couldn't sense her worry". Moreover, the general narrating style shows the narrator is mainly an observer rather than a participant in the story, which is common in this point of view. Moreover, other excerps use the pronoun "I" and this is only used if the text is written in the first-person point of view rather than the third-person point of view.
Answer:
The difference is that in the book Anne receives the diary outside the secret annex.
Explanation:
Anne Frank is the author of "The Diary of a Young Girl" where she recounts the times she was hidden, in a secret annex, along with family and other Jews during World War II. All were hidden so as not to be taken to the Nazi concentration camps. However, Anne starts writing in the diary long before she has to hide, as she won the diary at a birthday party, when Jews were still free citizens. In the play, this moment is presented differently, as Anne receives the diary when she is already hidden in the secret annex.
D is pointless because just rewriting it doesn't mean it is going to be better
B could help for spelling errors, but probably won't help with distracting errors
The answer could be A or C because with both of those you are getting an opinion from someone else. The answer is most likely C, because peer review tends to be more encouraged than teacher review.
Quotations add emphasis to ideas, so A is out. If quotations add emphasis to ideas then they also add strong support to claims therefore C is out. Quotations add credibility to writing as well so D is out. Therefore B is the right answer, you would not include direct quotations in a story to add length to a boring story.
